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Monday 28 August 2017

Skate Parks for Flat - roof building

Skateboard Parks for Flat - roof buildings

Initial idea:
  • My opinion is that skateboarding on top of a flat high roof building can be risky and challenging in order to fall off and create severe injuries.

Main issue:
Identify the main issue of the debate. Is is A or B?
  • A - Flat - top roofs are good for collecting garbage.
  • B - Spaces on a flat - top roof should be utilized as skateboard parks.

From my point of view I think the situation of this answer should be A because it is not secure of people to skate, from the problem of the elevated building creating injuries or even death.

Exaggeration:
  1. The representation of something in a way that depicts it as far greater or more important than is true.
  2. School grounds are so small that students are tripping over each other.
  3. If skateboarders knew they could skateboard on roof tops, they would not be ducking and diving in and out of pedestrians, doing ollies and manuals and spins and grinds.
Fact
Opinion
  • Many people live in apartment buildings where the huge space on top is empty - and underutilized.
  • A skateboard park on the roof would be great for skateboarders who live in buildings.
  • Several citizens live in apartment property where there is an underutilized and/or empty space situated at the top.
  • A skateboard park is a great idea for those local skateboarders located around.  

Summary - For and against
Arguments supportive to this statement:
Arguments against the statement:
  • Spaces in towns and cities are being gobbled up.
  • Too much ruckus of wheels on roof.
  • Skateboarders can’t concentrate on skating in busy streets.
  • Skateboarding will prevent too much noise for local citizens living in the apartments.
  • This planned area can be dangerous for  insignificant decisions.
  • The destination of the roof top could be very hazardous which will prevent injuries and disfigurement.

WALHT - Identify and and make connection throughout the text.

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