Hi Kayla, Claire here from St Patrick's school Greymouth. I really like your acrostic poem, I think the words you chose really describe scissors. I like they way you added in the WALT for this task so we could clearly see what you were meant to do.
Kia Ora Kayla, It's Ayesha here from Grey Main School in the Mamaku Hub. Wow I really like how creative your acrostic poem is. I also really like how you added your WALT.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more about what you have done and how long it took for you to make the acrostic poem.
This reminds me of when I made a acrostic poem, I have made two of them I can't remember the first one but the second one was about someone who was leaving the school (a few people made one for the person leaving). How long did it take for you to make this acrostic poem and are scissors overrated? From Ayesha
Great work Kayla.
ReplyDeleteHi Kayla, Claire here from St Patrick's school Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteI really like your acrostic poem, I think the words you chose really describe scissors. I like they way you added in the WALT for this task so we could clearly see what you were meant to do.
Good job, Blog you later.
Thanks Claire for your generous comment. Don't be shy to comment on some of my other works. Thanks!
DeleteKia Ora Kayla,
ReplyDeleteIt's Ayesha here from Grey Main School in the Mamaku Hub. Wow I really like how creative your acrostic poem is. I also really like how you added your WALT.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more about what you have done and how long it took for you to make the acrostic poem.
This reminds me of when I made a acrostic poem, I have made two of them I can't remember the first one but the second one was about someone who was leaving the school (a few people made one for the person leaving). How long did it take for you to make this acrostic poem and are scissors overrated?
From Ayesha